Casey
Posts : 3 Join date : 2010-04-24
| Subject: Sumiyaka clan (Done) Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:41 pm | |
| Name:Sumiyaka Kekkei Genkai: - Spoiler:
Any member of the clan can activate the Kekkei Genkai. If you activate your Kekkei Genkai your speed will boost up 20%, However If you use the Kekkei Genkai for more than 3 posts you will pass out. The user can also do things faster besides running and fighting. Secret Clan Jutsu:- Spoiler:
Name:Sound of Speed Rank: C-A Type: Genjutsu Element: Futon Description: The user will approach to run around the enemy at least 5 tines then on the 5th circle he/she will activate a genjutsu on the enemy tomake him/her think that the user is still running, however while the enemy is still in the genjutsu the user can attack or escape.
Name:Punching Technique Rank: E-C Type: Taijutsu Element:NA Description: The user will approach the enemy forward then punch him/her than the user will quickly run behind the enemy to kick his/her leg making them fall down face flat.
Name:Whirlpool Rank: B-A Type: Ninjutsu Element:Suiton Description: The user will run around the water in circles until a small whirlpool forms then the user will push the enemy in.(can only be used by a jounin and up)
Name: Kick Technique Rank: E-C Type: Taijutsu Element:NA Description: The user will throw something up in the air than kick it quickly towards the enemy.
History: Sumiyaka was the slowest one in his Acadimy class. People kept teasing him and making fun of him and and calling him names like Slow poke! or Snail! but Sumiyaka was used to it. After a few years when Sumiyaka graduated to Jounin he had interest in this girl named Kami and he wanted to marry her, However another Jounin wanted to marry Kami too. Kami was very interested in speed so when she found out two guys had a crush on her she told them they would have a race in a week and who ever won would would marry her. So Sumiyaka trained very hard and wouldn't rest until he was very fast. After one week of training he raced against his enemy and surprisingly won. So Kami married Sumiyaka and after a few years they gave birth to a healthy boy. Sumiyaka decided to name him his own name but Kami didn't approve, So they decided to make Sumiyaka their last name and they named the boy Tora Sumiyaka. Tora inherited the speed of his father and became a great ninja. After a few years Tora married his wife gave birth to five children. The children also inherited the speed and when they were Jounin they moved out of fathers house and went away to make families of their own. Clan Symbol: - Spoiler:
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Hontoosuru Kizuato Tsuchikage
Posts : 62 Join date : 2010-04-05 Age : 30 Location : Iwagakure
| Subject: Re: Sumiyaka clan (Done) Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:49 pm | |
| Twice as fast is INCREDIBLY powerful. Like overpowered level kind of power. Imagine if somebody just suddenly doubled their speed; they'd be unstoppable. A kekkai genkai should give a ninja an advantage, but it shouldn't make them unstoppable XD | |
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Vergil yashou Site Contributor
Posts : 93 Join date : 2010-04-07 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Sumiyaka clan (Done) Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:02 am | |
| Depends, if it is a taijutsu clan, it is quite the powerfull skill, but also quite a neccesary one for them. i would suggest to change the following a bit, - Spoiler:
Name:Ice Bullets Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element:Suiton and Futon Description: The user will mix water and air to make ice, then the user will fling the ice to the enemy.
Remove this, if you want speed, then Hyouton is a no. It is an advanced element, and you allready chose speed. and about this - Spoiler:
Any member of the clan can activate the Kekkei Genkai. This Kekkei Genkei allows you to be twice as faster as a normal ninja(if you are an Acadimy student you are twice as fast as a normal acadimy student. If you are a Genin twice as fast as a normal genin etc....). The user of the kekkei genkai will also see everything moving slow.
make it a percentage, since double the speed of a jounin is like "Damn, that fast". I know it is still {WIP} but i wanted to help you a bit with it, so you dont go and put alot of time into stuff you cant have. So you may think i am an asshole now (you're right), but i hope it will save you some time creating this. ^^ | |
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Casey
Posts : 3 Join date : 2010-04-24
| Subject: Re: Sumiyaka clan (Done) Mon Apr 26, 2010 1:44 am | |
| Changed what i have to change ^^ | |
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Vergil yashou Site Contributor
Posts : 93 Join date : 2010-04-07 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Sumiyaka clan (Done) Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:43 am | |
| Hmm, looks good casey ^^
now you just have to wait for approval from an admin. | |
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Casey
Posts : 3 Join date : 2010-04-24
| Subject: Re: Sumiyaka clan (Done) Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:45 am | |
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